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You'd think words would want to be free
Still, verses mine crawl into forms
I urge them to buck dated norms
Cajoling, nudging, how I plea!
Still, verses mine crawl into forms
You'd think words would want to be free
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The Skeptic's Kaddish 🇮🇱 
Indeed. Individuals, too. But freedom is frightening to those kept long in cages.
🤍 EXACTLY! 🤍
Great piece and I especially like the last two lines. Very cleaver David. Sending love. xoxox
😀 Thanks, Joni! 😀
❤️❤️My pleasure David.
You have become my all-time favourite poet.
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… thank you, Limp. Well, it’s good to know that I’m somebody’s cup of tea! ☕
Oh I love this one David!!! 👏👏👏
💕 Cindy 💕
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Shabbat shalom❣️
(going offline soon…)
Shabbat Shalom to you.. and Happy
Fun Fri-Yay! Sat for you soon. xo💖
Hehe! You described my words too well. I’m a willing prisoner to poetic forms!!
😀 You so are, Muri 😀
Shabbat shalom,
David
I wouldn’t only think words want to be free,
They want to be expressed beyond our caged thought,
They beg to form our lines and verses alike,
For out there, there is one or two or more who needs to hear
Probably read them.
Thank you for writing David and for your visit to Dreams N Reality and for liking my piece ‘When’. It’s so appreciated.
Keep penning, the inks quest to flow
Those are lovely words and images ~ thank you!
BTW – these lines really resonated with me in particular:
Sincerely,
David
I am glad to hear that. I am encouraged to write more.
Thank you.
Ayoifenik
🤗 Ayoifenik 🤗