It could be that the very idea of health is a plant seeded within fertile as we are unwittingly desperate as we are arable sown watered , sweat flowing from our over our down our onto our full flowering forceful , feracious , , fe,,, f f
d’Verse Poetics
‘Dungeons and Derivatives’
The idea of the prompt is to select one (from a list of eight sentences) and to change at least one word or more by replacing it with a derivative. Once you are done, unlock the muse from its dungeon and write a poem with the existing sentence.
I selected: โCould it be that this idea of healing is a seed that has been planted within us?โ
The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
That’s a lovely quote to start and I admire the creative format & the way the words fade and break off at the end.
โค Grace thank you! โค
-David
This is deeply profound! I so love “sweat flowing from our over our down our onto
our full flowering forceful,”.. sigh .. thank you so much for writing to my prompt! ๐๐
,David…what do I say?๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
โค Punam โค
I love how in the end your lines are disintegrating… like an ecstasy of passion
๐ Bjรถrn ๐