An Alliterisen
Perhaps prayer will work for her Some find wise worshipful words can comfort Whereas worship doesn't do much magic for cynical skeptics, surely she can connect? Should her heart's flowing fantasies supply solace, then that's splendid
The Alliterisen
The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. For example: Glorious Graves, and wonderful waves. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds.
The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
Prayer is comforting, even if you can’t name who you pray to. (K)
๐ค Kerfe ๐ค
Nice flow of verses, it was a really good alliterisen. Btw I’m curious, why didn’t you try haikus and senryus?
Q., I’ve written haikus and senryus… not recently, but of course I have ๐
Oh ok, have you posted them?I’ll try searching for them, if that’s the case.
I didn’t post a set of them – I only started doing series of particular forms recently… so they’re scattered throughout my list of poems.
But I never focused on them in particular. Here’s one I enjoyed writing –
https://skepticskaddish.com/2020/08/28/richelieu-or-the-conspiracy/
Ohh thanks! ๐
A wonderful wish and wise words for parenting perfection…. and alliteration is a fun frolic!
๐คก Muri ๐คก
love it
๐ Thanks, Lanna ๐
-David
Pleasure always!!! Really enjoy your posts ๐
I enjoyed the rhythm of this verse. It is an interesting style.
โค Thanks, Molly โค