Whether, or: Weather

An Alouette

Jerusalem winds
Know our outs and ins,
Blowing through sukkot* and souls.
Booths fall on their sides;
They've nowhere to hide...
Signs of our lack of control.
We hope it won't rain,
Though summer has waned;
May waters fall, but... not yet.
Outside's cool and crisp;
Stars glimmer like wisps;
Lovely - but let's not get wet!

Footnote

*A sukkah (plural: sukkot) is a festival booth that Jews traditionally erect for the autumn Festival of Sukkot, which is also known as the Festival of Booths and by other names.


The Alouette

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  • Consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each (12 lines or more);
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P.S.

As always, I’m offline for 25 hours for Shabbat, which runs from sunset every Friday to sunset on Saturday. I look forward to reconnecting soon!

15 thoughts on “Whether, or: Weather”

    1. 💛 Terveen 💛 – the top came off before Shabbat, unfortunately, but the wind has now died down… And the festival will be over in a couple of days anyway…

    1. thanks 🙂

      it’s really just a matter of time until the rainy season kicks in here in Israel… and we do need the rain, as you can imagine… I just don’t like getting stuck outside in it 😉

      Sincerely,
      David

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