Selious, or: Sirry

My 1st Virelai Ancien

I know, I know! Rhyme is passé!
A game that little children play...
But I feel young!
Old school, they say, but who is 'they'?
Besides, I never quite could stay
my playful tongue.
So, I suppose you'll have your say -
Read to the end, then: yay or nay -
Best left unsung?
Don't worry about my dismay,
For I know well, far and away -
I'm not top rung!

Honestly, I'm not too high-strung...
Should I just stuff it with a bung?
Please tell me so.
I'm not sure when opinion swung,
But many rhymers were left stung -
Among them: Poe!
Their very hearts - indeed, their lungs
of glorious rhymes had been wrung...
Oh, such a blow!
Still, some to the old ways have clung.
These days, I find myself among
those that rhymes sew.

Still, can't say I feel too much woe,
as I write for myself, and so
to hell with trends.
Besides which, my poetic flow
tends to trickle out rather slow
(rhyme suits my ends).
It's true I once cared - long ago.
I wrote for others - just for show,
scared to offend.
Thus I was willing to forgo
those forms that set my thoughts aglow...
No more, my friends!

See, while I'd like to make amends,
I'm really not the sort who tends
to just... obey.
And, sometimes, somebody commends
me, saying that my rhyme transcends
the everyday.
I guess it really just depends
on how well those that fads defend
can truth convey.
This rhyme, though clumsy, still extends
to all who would cute quirks suspend
or muse betray.

Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!

36 thoughts on “Selious, or: Sirry”

  1. Write as you please. People will read as they please. I guess there shouldn’t be a problem. Then why is the world in so much turmoil? Because simple living and communicating is a mere figment of imagination. Keep going, David! 🙂

  2. It is wonderful to have so many tools in your toolbox, and it is fun to use them all. How boring if we were confined to free verse, as useful a tool as that is! Rhyme on, David! I will do the same. ❤

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