My 2nd waltmarie
Comprised of 5 consecutive American sentences
Creative self-expression injects fulfillment into mere being. Some philosophers reflect upon the attributes of the human. Maybe mankind is like every other species. Perhaps it is more. Are we not intended to be more humane and merciful than just? Seek balance between existing as a human doing and being.
Created as a nonce by Candace Kubinec.
- 10 lines
- Even lines are two syllables in length, odd lines are longer (but no specific syllable count)
- Even lines make their own mini-poem if read separately
No other rules for subject or rhymes.
The American sentence
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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13 thoughts on “Doings, or: Beings”
I like how this all fits together. Nice job David.
Masterful! I love the question and the apparent answer.
❤ Thanks, Muri ❤
This poem is so well written, David ✨
🤗 Navin 🤗
David ✨ 🤗 💫
I like especially the two-syllable poem. (K)
Thanks, Kerfe ❤ – that's a fun challenge to make work!
I agree: that balance is what we strive for!
☯️ Ingrid ☯️
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You really aced your American Sentence, Joanna – I love it ❤