Sneaking away from the yeshiva

dโ€™Verse prosery

My health hasn’t suffered for the many puncture wounds dealt to my religious dogma, Rabbi. I am bombarded, yet I stand, and that’s precisely the point, can’t you understand? Assailed by doubts, awash in religious transgressions, adrift from my old synagogue community; yet I remain standing, even thriving!

In fact, I’m happier than ever. Freedom has never tasted sweeter. All through my childhood, I was taught, expected, required(!) to disregard my critical faculties in lieu of a “truth” entirely disconnected from the world around me. However, I eventually found refuge at the public library. Sneaking away from the yeshiva every day, I would uncover the world forbidden to me through novels, historic works, and reference books. I studied physics and biology; I taught myself four languages; I realized that the earth is billions, not thousands, of years oldโ€ฆ

No, Rabbi, I have no regrets.


The prompt

dโ€™Verse prosery is flash fiction with a beginning, a middle and an end, in any genre of the authorโ€™s choice, no longer than 144 words. This very short piece of prose must include an assigned line from a poem, within the 144 word limit. Writers may change the punctuation of the assigned line, but they may not insert words within the quotation.

The assigned quotation was:

I am bombarded yet I stand.

-from Adrienne Rich‘s poem ‘Planetarium’

P.S. This is a work of fiction

The prosery piece above was written in the voice of a sheltered young man raised in an ultra-Orthodox Jewish enclave who left the fold.

70 thoughts on “Sneaking away from the yeshiva”

  1. I love this story of the young man finding the freedom to learn his own truth. Thank you, David. Rock on! ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. ๐Ÿค Karima, thank you ๐Ÿค – I wasn’t raised ultra-Orthodox (my family was secular) but I’m a member of several forums with people who were, and I’ve watched a good number of documentaries about such Jews who left their fundamentalist communities.

    1. ๐Ÿ’™ Rob ๐Ÿ’™ – it does take tremendous courage… in some cases, kids like this don’t even know English because only Yiddish is spoken in their enclaves…

      -David

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