‘b’, or: ‘d’

My 1st blank verse

Iowa City, Iowa; I still
remember snippets of those childhood days;
the tree in our front yard that I would climb
getting sawed down to a stump for no good
reason; living across the street from my
school: Ernest Horn Elementary School,
where my mother took me to learn to ride
my bicycle when my father's patience
had run out; getting my family of
Pound Puppies taken away - punishment...
I can't recall what it was that I'd done;
maybe it was for splashing water on
my father's hearing aid; his bloody legs
and arms, after riding his bicycle
across some sand on the way home from work;
bird poop landing on the sidewalk in front
of me, as I was strolling around with
my mother; that first and only filling
I ever got in a tooth; Jacqueline
was the name of my crush back in first grade;
she had brown hair and very big glasses,
which I photographed casually when
my parents told me that we'd be moving
away; she was wearing a purple shirt
and skirt in that photo, squinting at the
sun; my mother panicking at a fire
blazing in our kitchen, while six-year-old
me calmly turned on the hose and doused it;
getting my foot injured because mother
insisted on sitting me on the back
of her bicycle without a children's
seat and so, unprotected, it got caught
in the spokes of her back wheel; my cousin
and aunt moving to the United States
from the Soviet Union as it was
falling apart; feeling foolish because
I insisted that my aunt should give me
chocolate milk for my cereal, which
tasted horrible; my older cousin
playing in the little tent I'd set up
in my bedroom and hitting me for some
reason; being warned that somebody at
a meal we attended might suddenly
begin shouting because he had Tourette's;
accidentally stapling my finger
at my mother's office, while there alone;
her leaving me to watch a seemingly
cute movie with a small, fuzzy creature
on the cover, which made me run, screaming
out of the room when the Gremlins came out
of those slimy cocoons; being taken
to see a university basket-
ball game; having an Atari gaming
station; the moving trucks and the magnets
shaped like little trucks, which the movers gave
us that I really liked for some reason;
figuring out the difference between
a lowercase 'd' and a lowercase
'b' with my letter magnets on the fridge...

d’Verse Poetics Prompt:

‘In The Light of Other Days’

At d’Verse, poets were prompted to write a poem recalling some specific thing or things from the past OR more generally about what evokes a memory or memories in you.

For an extra optional challenge, poets could write their pieces in ten-syllable or blank verse line (to give the sensation of actual speech, engaging others).

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Ben Harper (b. 1969)

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48 thoughts on “‘b’, or: ‘d’”

  1. This poem brought back so many memories, David. I loved Pound Puppies. They were so cute. And I literally had to beg and wait for an Atari. It was the best thing ever. Those past glimpses may fade but they will never disappear. Thank you for this. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Being Poets and writers, we tend to hold on to memories and to feel deeply a lot more than most people. Poignant write. ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

  3. Wow! you have some very interesting memories David. Seems that children seem to imprint incidents happening in their life. And they last into old age!! Well done!

  4. Memory is evocative and a world rises into view with the spell you incant here, focusing on details and watching them grow and fill out. Good work.

  5. Stream of consciousness is a very sturdy form of blank verse, and you knocked this one out of the park. You hooked us, and like on a verbal rollercoaster, we buzzed through those memories, hanging on every word. If this is your first foray into blank SOC verse, you should do more.

  6. It is interesting the things that are remembered and the things that are forgotten… I believe it is the things ties to emotions that cement the memories. Those events without an emotional component are like perfume – we smell then and then they fade.

  7. What? No Kool-Aid mustaches and Silly Putty? ๐Ÿ˜€ This is glorious, David. So glad you shared this with us. Hope your foot is okay–that bicycle spoke injury made me cringe! ๐Ÿ™‚

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