My 1st Sheshire
A memory still gnaws at me; I was self-righteous in my youth. One week, my parents had headaches; Erring, they'd bought... decaf coffee. A jerk, I smirked, learning the truth Of their addiction and mistake. Then, in college, t'was a café... Across the street from my dorm room. I'd drink cappuccinos and chais, Quickly losing my 'childish' way and track of bev'rages consumed. At eighteen, forgot I'd been 'wise'. Then, last weekend, behind the wheel: Staying awake was dreadful stress! At minimart, I begged them, "Please..." As I stood, struggling not to keel And nonstop yawns could not suppress... Until downing two black coffees. This poet knows he's got no pride, I can't live without my cuppa ~ Must have it by my side!
A poem based on six-line verses with a closing couplet. Here are the rules:
- The Sheshire is comprised of three stanzas of 6 lines with a rhyme scheme of either ABABAB or ABCABC. Completed by a rhymed couplet.
- Each line has the same number of syllables. The one exception to this is the last line, which may have up to six additional syllables. The additional syllables must a phrase that is set aside (by parenthesis or dashes, for example). If this aside is removed, the correct syllable count would be there and the line would remain a reasonable sentence.
- Each stanza should have a shift in tone. The ending couplet should leave the reader (or at least the poet) with a grin. It can be a darkly ironic grin, but a grin, nonetheless.
The derivation is from the Hebrew words for six (‘shesh’) and poem/song (‘shir’), meaning: six poem.
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Another great form.. I thought I was done with my coffee (2 cups) but whats another cup between friends.. It’s all your fault David… 🤣🤣
❤ 😉 Cindy 😉 ❤
I didn’t think I had a caffeine problem. Then the pandemic hit and the office closed and I was stuck at home where I didn’t even have a coffee maker because I would just get my morning coffee when I arrived at the office. And boy did I notice a difference!
Driving without any coffee was a horrible idea, which I will not be repeating again…. It was seriously a dangerous and stupid thing for me to do.
I enjoyed reading your caffeinated journey that began with a decaf. So fun and creative! ☕ Another interesting form.
💜🙏🏻 Michele 🙏🏻💜
Very amusing story, David. Also very relatable ❤ I used to drink caffeinated tea. Once when I stopped suddenly, I had several days of headaches!
🤭❤️ Cheryl ❤️🤭
Ha! I was once addicted – to the caffeine but not to coffee. Only Sparky likes it in coffee. I’m completely decaffeinated and neither of the sons likes coffee – they prefer the carbonated caffeine delivery systems! Oh, well. If the coffee inspired this poem then it is all good!! (because the poem is very good unlike the flavor of coffee!)
I actually like the flavor…. Unfortunately.