Sevenling (Hazy wisps of)
Hazy wisps of last night's dream sequences lit
upon the faintest glimmers of reflections swirling
around fantasies beyond the reaches of my consciousness.
I rubbed the sleep from my eyes this morning; savored
the aroma of my coffee with a contented sigh; stepped
out and breathed in Jerusalem's crisp autumn air.
Hours later, I still have no idea what to write about.
The sevenling
Structure:
- Lines one to three should contain three connected or contrasting statements, or a list of three details, names or possibilities. This can take up all of the three lines or be contained anywhere within them.
- Lines four to six should similarly have three elements (statements, details, names, or possibilities) connected directly or indirectly or not at all.
- The seventh line should act as a narrative summary or punchline or an unusual juxtaposition.
- While there are no set metrical rules, because of its form, some rhythm, meter and/or rhyme is desirable.
- The visual structure of the form is two stanzas of three lines, with a solitary seventh line last line.
Also:
- Titles are not required. The original convention was to title the sevenling: “Sevenling (followed by the first few words in parentheses)”, but the form has evolved to other title conventions including dropping “Sevenling” completely from the title.
- Sevenling should be mysterious, offbeat or disturbing, giving a feeling that only part of the story is being told.
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–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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But it always come to you…
Ah, that’s self-assured writing bliss. 🙂
not always – believe me! 🙂
A coffee and some fresh air seem like a good way to start the day – the words will come when they’re ready, (as they evidently did!)
🧡 Marion 🧡 – thank you so much!
-David
A Sevenling! It has been a while since I wrote one… this one is a fun romp to the last line!
💖❤️ Muri ❤️💖
And minutes later, you wrote this sevenling..? Ah, this narrates the situation I found myself in yesterday, when I sat for four hours thinking of a single idea for a poem, and arrived at none! 😀
well sometimes we have to write about nothing too!
And I did, remember? 😉
Somehow the word sevenling reminds me of a character from Middle Earth in a fantasy story.
I used to read a lot of those kinds of books as a kid
I never know what I’m doing until I do it. (K)
to what extent do you let the words you’re writing lead you?
They always do. Of course I then refine and revise, but I almost never start out knowing exactly what I want to say. Or even vaguely for the most part.
Even as a designer, within particular parameters, I liked to try lots of different things or approaches. Don’t box yourself in too soon–you never know what you will find.
that comes through in your art, Kerfe
❤
David
I’m sure it does.
You are so good. It’s soooo good to read you. Someone who writes effortlessly beautifully.. David 🤗s for you .
😊 thanks so very much, Yassy 😊
Welcome 🙏🏼
Oh, this most certainly works, my friend. This will do quite nicely.
🤗 George 🤗
Such beautiful truth in your words
😘 Lauren 😘
I like this.
💕 Misky 💕 – thank you much!
-David
That’s how that works David.. the muse took you by the hand. I know you adore exploring poetic forms, but the muse sometimes just wants to write about impressions, feelings, contentment. I found this poem to be like a beautiful shifting breeze..mashallah! ❤️
💝 Karima 💝
You just wrote a steller piece, dear friend. Tell it to your brain. Amazing. thanks for sharing your Jerusalem autumn air with me. Love it.
💟 Thanks, Selma 💟