An American sentence:
Language trickles slowly, wearing down our obstinate societies.
What’s an ‘American Sentence’?
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
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31 thoughts on “Stone, or: Water”
It definitely trickles slowly, but I’m not so sure it can get through all the barriers we keep building. (K)
I was attempting to convey optimism, but I’m also not sure…
Much obliged my friend! 😁❤️
Words have innate power – it is up to the individual to sharpen them into swords or pens!!
🗡️🖊️ Muri 🖊️🗡️
Moves very slowly David, agreed there! But in the light of the uncertainty and fear of coronavirus; the rapidly changing climate and constant state of war or threat of war, I believe there’s more of an appetite than ever for the language of poetry; real poetry and the truth and beauty that comes with it.
💛👍 Ken 👍💛
Speaking of the power of language David, I’ve a new piece up called “PARAMETERS OF TIME” which was inspired by a conversation we had around that Jack Kerouac quote I blogged about last Friday. 😁
I’ll check it out ❣️
enlightning comments david🙂
I aspire to be pretentious 😉
This reminds me a Portuguese proverb. It goes something like: soft water on a hard stone, it sticks until it pierces.
Just like Ovid:
language stutters –
unless I sing
PS in German slang ‘der singt aber…’ is not just used for canaries but also for villains who tell all
very nice 🙂
Wait, wear down? I’d disagree with that, given how my friends consider it 😉
And btw, here’s my next set of tankas:
(I just took a short break from my studies, don’t mind 😉 )
Veera, so how would you describe the relationship between language and society?
and how do your friends consider it?
Let’s see… I believe language is something which is responsible for a society’s existence, the base of all communication, and hence one of the building blocks of society.
And my friends’ opinions, with respect to the sentence itself is that language is something not so important in life, but something which should be learnt on our own… essentially, they think language shouldn’t define a society’s structure, it should just function as always.
the idea that language is not important in life is not one that I can accept at all.
whether it should or shouldn’t is one question… whether it does or doesn’t is another. I think the way we use words – and the words we choose to use profoundly shape the directions that our societies move in. TBH, I’m not even sure by what your friends mean when they say “as always”… do your friends think societies are somehow functioning without their respective languages?
“do your friends think societies are somehow functioning without their respective languages?”
Nah, they just hate the idea of giving so much importance to language, but they know, deep inside, perhaps, that they can’t fight it, its something they’ll have to accept, one way or the other..
the american sentence rings so true! glad you continue to write thesez.😃
Yes, the truth sets you free
💙💟 Kunjal 💟💙
This is so true
On the otherhand
One Jester’s enjoyment and laughter
Is another Jester’s deepest anguish
These are the ones who ultimately commit suicide.
How sweet and awful life can be all at the same time
Of course it will be affirmed
With righteous justification
😳 that is kinda dark, Abi.
But it’s true
You either derail
Get off the next stop
Or follow the dominant rule
You are a wise and wonderful person 💕
Thank you David ❤