True love, or: Deep connection

A waltmarie

Comprised of 5 consecutive American sentences

Drawn in by the poem's first verses, she was blown-away by
the end.
He'd never been trained as a writer. So, clearly, he'd employed 
Whenever he took up the pen, he always thought of her, his
true love.
Her imagination raced. She'd no sway over where his words
took her.
Intoxicated by his use of language, she felt Earth slip

The waltmarie

Created as a nonce by Candace Kubinec.

  • 10 lines
  • Even lines are two syllables in length, odd lines are longer (but no specific syllable count)
  • Even lines make their own mini-poem if read separately

No other rules for subject or rhymes.

The American sentence

Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didnโ€™t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.

The requirements:

  1. Composed in one line;
  2. Syllabic, 17 syllables;
  3. Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
  4. Complete sentence or sentences;
  5. Includes a turn or enlightenment.

Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!

40 thoughts on “True love, or: Deep connection”

  1. Very nice piece of writing and I must agree with the comments making me laugh as well. Laughter is great medicine so I say let the giggling begin. Blessings to you and your family David. Joni

  2. Iโ€™ve emailed the poetry partners page to myself – the impetus is timely.
    Thanks for the support.

      1. David – Iโ€™ve posted a poem to your site, but mistakenly with a link to my old page which I no longer use – my current page is – I donโ€™t know if you are able to update my link, if not it doesnโ€™t matter.

  3. “He’d never been trained as a writer. So, clearly, he’d employed magic.” This made me chuckle David! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ As I’ve never been trained as a writer myself.

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