Comprised of 5 consecutive American sentences
Drawn in by the poem's first verses, she was blown-away by the end. He'd never been trained as a writer. So, clearly, he'd employed magic. Whenever he took up the pen, he always thought of her, his true love. Her imagination raced. She'd no sway over where his words took her. Intoxicated by his use of language, she felt Earth slip away.
Created as a nonce by Candace Kubinec.
- 10 lines
- Even lines are two syllables in length, odd lines are longer (but no specific syllable count)
- Even lines make their own mini-poem if read separately
No other rules for subject or rhymes.
The American sentence
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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40 thoughts on “True love, or: Deep connection”
Lovely inspiration. Both are swooning over the other. Love this. 🙂
💓🖤 Terveen 🖤💓
The last sentence I particularly love.
🤍 🤍 Marion 🤍 🤍
geeze, you accuse me of being too sweet 😉
do like it!
Takes one to know one❣️
thanks Sweetie 😉