An American sentence:
With true poets, it’s hard to know whether words are servants or masters.
What’s an ‘American Sentence’?
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
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27 thoughts on “Servants, or: Masters”
Must surrender to them. They can be either. Lovely words, David. 🙂
💡 Thanks, Terveen 💡
I am merely a servant in the house of words,themselves servants to their masters, true poets. Indeed, it has been a pleasure reading your poems, and I must say I’ve learnt a lot! (If I may, reading from your blog inspired me to check out the world of freeverse 😉 )
💚❤️ Veera ❤️💚
so very true 🙂
❤ Kate ❤
Compelling words in your American sentence force me to submit:
Serve compelling words
Of masters 🙂
A kindness only surpassed by wisdom warms the heart’s grateful cockles.
In cool compliments
❤ Rupali ❤ – thank you!
A wry smile played across my face before slipping into poetry.
💖 Muri 💖
Fabulous. This is very interesting and informative as well. It’s a great initiative on your part. Congratulations.
💞 Aparna 💞
Oh my, that’s the truth. Love this, David. 💖
💘 Jeff 💘
Or is it choices choices
Which cloak, servant or master should i wear for this one…
Or is it mainly clear?
💓 Abi 💓
I say words are our masters and we are the servsnts. Great sentence.
💗 Molly 💗
So true, David❤️
💜 Kaushal 💜 – this one actually reminds me of your writings, if I may be so bold!
That’s why I liked it, David. You’re an excellent communicator 👍💖
But what makes a good poet,the servant or the Master? You two are very acceptable Wordsmiths.
💝 Andrew 💝