A butterfly cinquain
I spat
the orange juice
out into the sink drain;
eyed the carton; and notified
Papa,
who chuckled at my innocence.
"Have you forgotten you've
already brushed
your teeth?"
#TankaTuesday
The above butterfly cinquain was written for Colleen M. Chesebro’s ‘Tanka Tuesday’ prompt: Poets were prompted to write syllabic poems based on “sweet & sour” memories, which means the poems must contain these concepts.
This particular memory rang out clearly in my mind.
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–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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❤️💞 Colleen 💞❤️
Haha! So clever. That’s definitely a terrible taste. 🙂
😜 Terveen 😜
This is so good, David. In Weight Watchers, they tell us to brush our teeth after we eat! It works!! LOL!
♥️🤎 Colleen 🤎♥️ ~ thanks!
Isn’t that a fact: tastes funny after brushing one’s teeth. Lovely, butterfly cinquain we can relate to for better. Thanks for sharing. xo
❤ Selma ❤ ~ a hard fact to swallow!
Haha! Nothing worse than mint and orange juice!
❤ Muri ❤ ~ I know!
Very cute. Is this your daughter’s photo?
❤ Dolly ❤ ~ no, I don't post pictures of her online…
Makes sense.
Even coffee tastes bad right after you’ve brushed your teeth. (K)
❤ Kerfe ❤ ~ true!
~David
I can relate to this poem. Lol! It’s crazy how a clean mouth will change the palate so drastically. Great poem, David! 🙂
❤ Yvette ❤ ~ I remember really thinking that there was something wrong with the orange juice! I learned my lesson quickly!
Aww the sweet innocence.
❤ Thanks, Bella ❤
~David
Time to reach for the orange flavored toothpaste!
😀 indeed! 😀
cute! nice cinquain.. now don’t ask me to make one.. I do love tho💖
I would never make such an unreasonable request!
😉
David