The evil queen, certain the dwarves were away, mining on the other side of the mountain, passed the towering woodpile on her way to the door.
Seven pairs of eyes watched from behind the logs, flummoxed that she would be so brazen.
This piece of flash fiction was written in response to:
33 thoughts on “Seven pairs of eyes”
Creepy and funny at once and would (does) make me wonder what happens next and how that tension would resolve.
Yup! And how that huge 🪓 in the photo might play into the plot, Wyndolynne!
Lovely invention for the word prompt. 😁
💚💖 Marion 💖💚
Hehe! And if that had been the case perhaps the story would have had a different ending…
🤍💓 Muri 💓🤍
Chop,chop go 7 pairs of hands.
Just to be sure, to be sure
🤎💟 Andrew 💟🤎
A great word, fits perfectly. (K)
♥️❤️ Kerfe ❤️♥️
Brazen is what we evil queens DO. 😉
🙃 Shay 🙃
That is a terrible queen
And flummox is such a cute word especially used in the context of the seven dwarfs⚘
But couldn’t you find an evil king instead??😯
🤣 Abi 🤣
🤣🤣, i know, when in fact there is an honourable prince in the whole story of beauty.
A delight …..
💛💞 Helen 💞💛
I’m flummoxed for sure!
🤍💓 Bev 💓🤍
Nice brevity here, David. Well done.
I thought you might enjoy this:
🤎💟 Ron 💟🤎
You’re right! I love it 😍
Flummoxed. I love it!
💜💖 Sherry 💖💜 ~ thanks!
this is an utterly cool flash fiction Ben and some great multi-prompting! Always glad to see you at the Muse!
🧡💓 Carrie 💓🧡 ~ thanks!
BTW, please feel free to call me ‘David’ because that is my first name. ‘ben’ just means ‘son of’ in Hebrew. My father’s name was ‘Alexander’, and I created this blog in his memory. I know my pen name is confusing… Sorry ❣️