A poem written jointly with my 7-year-old daughter
The poem below is a joint effort, written by me and my daughter, after having watched the new Disney movie ‘Raya and the Last Dragon’. It attempts to provide a general summary of the plot, but both of us highly recommend that you see this movie for yourselves, if you’ve not yet done so (it’s delightful)!
The druuns turned most people to stone; Five dragons fought them off alone They poured their powers into a gem, And let the druuns overrun them With the gem, Sisu wiped out the evil, But there followed an awful upheaval Folks named their lands after dragon parts, And the people grew really cold hearts All the trust everyone had once was gone; the lands were no longer one Then a girl named Raya was born, Who found a dragon with a small horn This dragon was the last of her kind ~ So, this was a really lucky find! Sisu thought things had gone as planned; She held the gem up in her hand With the gem’s magic, she did glow, Feeling her dragon powers grow Together, they came up with a plan To unite every child, woman, and man They needed every other piece So that cold stone would all men release They would travel to each dragon land, but things did not work out as planned From ‘Tail’, ‘Talon’, ‘Spine’, and ‘Fang’, They assembled a small, motley gang Raya, Boun, Noi, Tong and Namaari Worked together, learning to say sorry They combined their gems into one jewel Proving people were more kind than cruel A bright light flashed; great rains came down; Returned the dragon race of much renown Dragons and humankind were delighted… ‘Tail’, ‘Spine’, ‘Talon’, ‘Fang’ ‘Heart’ united!
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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62 thoughts on “Kumandra, or: Friendship”
I liked this one a lot. I noticed several comments about a movie,is it a good one? 🙂
My daughter and I give it 4 thumbs up 👍👍👍👍
Okay,that makes it a good one 🙂
That’s a happy ending. (K)
Well, it’s Disney 😛
What a delightful read..This might be my favorite collaboration of yours David:):) and I always knew she would be a poet.:)..after all her dad is one and that’s a heady role model, for a little girl Alf Mabrook you two!!
💕🤎 Karima 🤎💕
I have seen this movie many times as my almost 3 yo granddaughter lives it. It’s such a good movie.
💜💝 Sadje 💜💝
Delightful! I will definitely watch it!
💞💛 Tricia 💛💞
This is awesome, David! Both of you did an excellent job! The imagery and rhyme scheme are intriguing.
💖🧡 trE 🧡💖
Poet in the making. Nice. 👏
💚💓 Selma 💓💚
Now we know who has the real talent at home! My little one enjoyed the poem and the movie.
🤎💕 Greg 💕🤎
Best compliment I can pay ye for this gem David is that it makes me want to to see the movie! 😁 Like father, like daughter when it comes to the poetry I must say! 😉😁👍
💝💜 Ken 💜💝
Splendid!!!!!! You’re training a poet I see 😊A brilliant poetic summary.
💘💙 Dee 💙💘
💛💞 Tricia 💞💛
😘 Barbara 😘