An American sentence in 10 words:
Only explosions and faces of tyrants brighten today’s #darkling world.
What’s an ‘American Sentence’?
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
The requirements:
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
#PenYourTen
The above American Sentences were first written for a #PenYourTen Twitter prompt; the prompt word was: ‘Darkling’. This prompt requires a response of exactly 10 words.
darkling
/ˈdärkliNG/
adjective LITERARY
growing dark or characterized by darkness.
“the darkling sky”
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–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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“Darkling” is one of my favorite words for poetry. You’ve put it to good use, David. 🙂
🤩 Mike 🤩
Indeed a darkling world…
💔 Muri 💔
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💖 Filipa 💖
Good one.
❤️💘 Molly 💘❤️
Sad yet profoundly true David! 👍🤔😟
💜💞 Ken 💞💜
You know I love Ginsberg’s poetry and your sentence haiku is something he would have approved of. ❤
💗💛 Colleen 💛💗