Ever so tenderly and with devoted reverence, Neeraj approached his beloved Aarav and pet his friend’s face, as the light slowly faded from the ancient, gentle elephant’s luminous golden eyes.
This piece of flash fiction was written in response to:
As the light faded slowly
The Skeptic's Kaddish ๐ฎ๐ฑ 
Oh, nicely done!
๐ Ana, thanks! ๐
Sincerely,
David [ben Alexander]
Heartwarming linesโฆ
๐ Navin ๐
A whole story in just a few lines! Bravo!
โค ๐ Muri ๐ โค
Charming, David. But so sad.
โค Thanks, Bill โค
Such a heart rending piece Dear David! ๐๐
โค Cindy โค
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I really felt this, as I adore elephants!
๐ thanks, Sherry ๐
Sincerely,
David
What a beautiful tiny tale!
๐ค Sunita ๐ค ~ thank you
Sincerely,
David
the pic and the piece are enormous and full of emotions!
โค ๐ Thanks so much, Kunjal โค ๐