In five American Sentences
The young man climbed up to the roof in the raging storm, feeling groovy. Hooting and hollering, his friends cheered him on, as he started to dance. Skipping and jumping along the roof's edge, he kept his balance, but just. Sadly, the speed of his wild pirouettes was more than he could maintain. In his cocaine-induced ecstasy, he suddenly lost his balance.
W3 poetry prompt
This poem was written in response to Kunjal’s W3 prompt ~ to write a poem in 16 lines or less that includes the word ‘groovy’.
d’Verse Open Link Night #319
This poem was written for d’Verse OLN #319, as well as for this week’s d’Verse poetics prompt on ‘peer pressure’.
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When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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53 thoughts on “Feeling groovy, or: Peer pressure”
❤ Pratap ❤ ~ thanks so much!
I really like the way you’ve melded two forms into one here (an “American Waltmarie?”). You’ve got such a dynamic touch when it comes to effortlessly creating in various and sundry formats. Good stuff, David. 🙂
🤎 😳 Mike 😳 🤎
Nooo! Had a feeling this wasn’t going to end well …
😓 Marion 😓
That was intense… Is he okay though? Wonderful poem, visually captivating, Ben👌🏼👌🏼
❤ 🙂 Deeksha ❤ 🙂 ~ whether or not he's okay is up to the readers' interpretations! 😀
BTW, please feel free to call me ‘David’ because that is my first name.
The word ‘ben’ in Hebrew simply means ‘son of’, and my father’s name was ‘Alexander’… I created this blog in his memory.
I know it’s confusing because ‘Ben’ is also a name in English – I’m sorry about the confusion!
Okay! I didn’t know that, David.. And it’s so heart-warming that you started a blog for your father. Sending you good wishes🙏🏼😄
🤗 🤗 Deeksha 🤗 🤗
WOW David… ❤❤❤ Vertigo
🥴 Filipa 🥴
Oops! If there ever was a drug for turning people into idiots…
❤️ Ingrid ❤️ ~ for this poem, I researched which drugs make people act crazy. Beyond marijuana, I have no personal experience.
‘Idiot powder’ for sure!
Tut tut… poor guy.
😱 Sadje 😱
definitely not good to be high. great response!
💖 Kunjal 💖