An American sentence:
He trimmed his beard before and after rinsing off, pruning errant hairs.
What’s an ‘American Sentence’?
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didn’t work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
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16 thoughts on “Errant hairs, or: Beard trimmer”
Errant hairs, beware, they turn up everywhere. Enjoying your American Sentences David.
💛 🤍 thanks, Paul 🤍 💛
These errant strays
Now pruned away
Afterwards the look of
“I see your face on every cold winter day?”
🧔🏻💜 Abi 💜🧔🏻
I know what you’ll be doing today David! 😂
😀 I trimmed my beard on Friday before Shabbat!
💖 Molly 💖
Delightful American Sentence, David! 🙂
✨️🙏🏻✨️ Cheryl ✨️🙏🏻✨️
Hehe! Both my sons are now fully bearded and though son#2 keeps his very neatly trimmed and shaped, son#1 is attempting the Musketeer look. The moustache is a bit wild unless he waxes it which he rarely does (due to having to wear a mask). There are times when he will have a long hair or two that wants to stick out at an odd angle making it very distracting when talking to him!
💘🧔🏻 Muri 🧔🏻💘
Ah, a topic of which I am blissfully ignorant as I have never had a beard to trim!
🧔🏻💚 Annette 💚🧔🏻
I suck at poetry, but I’d be willing to give it a go haha…! 😀