In the form of 5 Kimos
two first graders play together for hours at their local Gymboree, out of their parents' view
packed suitcases in marble tiled foyer full of life's necessities await airport shuttle
childish drawings made with deep affection lie folded in boy's red backpack beneath his cushioned seat
stomach full of food court delicacies, worn out from bouncing off walls, children stream from the mall
night sky clouds over Atlantic Ocean; stewardesses push food carts; turbulence rocks sweet dreams
The cadralor is a poem of 5, unrelated, numbered stanzaic images, each of which can stand alone as a poem, is fewer than 10 lines, and ideally constrains all stanzas to the same number of lines. Imagery is crucial to cadralor: each stanza should be a whole, imagist poem, almost like a scene from a film, or a photograph. The fifth stanza acts as the crucible, alchemically pulling the unrelated stanzas together…
The kimo shares much in common with the haiku: it appears in three lines, making it a tristich, with each line following a diminishing pattern:
- Ten syllables
- Seven syllables
- Six syllables
Each of these lines are unrhymed.
The kimo often deals with a static image, a single moment in which there is no movement. Along with its brief nature, this makes it an excellent form to reflect on or celebrate a particular instance.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
10 thoughts on “Endings, or: Beginnings”
You are wonderful and amazing; how you gathered together the three forms of poetry to produce five unique stories.
❤ Abi ❤
crisply painted scenes in each stanza – and I like the paradox in that final line as well as this:
“childish drawings made with deep affection”
p.s. your venture into all these forms is to be admired, David – this one I’d like to try one day.
❤ Laura ❤ ~ thanks so much; I really appreciate it!
Travel as a child is a vastly different experience from travel with a child!
❤ Muri ❤ ~ so so true
You never disappoint! 🙂
❤ Annette ❤ ~ you're sweet
Excellent David! 👏😁👌Love the descriptions; imagery and how the stories can stand alone or as part of a story.
❤ Ken ❤ ~ thank you so much