Two little ghosts who had long since died Came down to Earth for a bicycle ride; But the tykes, ephemeral & small, Could not work the pedals at all; Thus fantasy and real life did collide
‘What do you see’ Prompt #146
For Sadje’s weekly #WDYS prompt, she offered the photo below as inspiration for writers to produce art.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
49 thoughts on “Vision, or: Collision”
[…] David; Vision or collision […]
Wonderful take on the prompt.
🤍🙏🏻 Jude 🙏🏻🤍
Well written 🙂
💖 thanks, Lakshmi 💖
Your creative limerick covers a range of emotions. Engaging lines, David.
💙🙏🏻 Michele 🙏🏻💙
A round of applause and additional cheering for this delightful limerick!! I enjoyed every single word!
🤍🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻🤍
nicely done.. i didn’t see till now that their feet weren’t touching the petals David! 💖
💝 Cindy 💝
Love it, David. ❤️
🤗🙏🏻 Punam 🙏🏻🤗
Cute and clever use of words and the picture!
🤍🙏🏻 Annette 🙏🏻🤍
What an excellent take on the prompt, David! I love it!
💛🙏🏻 Eugi 🙏🏻💛
Delightful. Poor little ghosts!
😻 Dolly 😻