A limerick
Two little ghosts who had long since died
Came down to Earth for a bicycle ride;
But the tykes, ephemeral & small,
Could not work the pedals at all;
Thus fantasy and real life did collide
โWhat do you seeโ Prompt #146
For Sadjeโs weekly #WDYS prompt, she offered the photo below as inspiration for writers to produce art.
Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
[…] David; Vision or collision […]
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Wonderful take on the prompt.
๐ค๐๐ป Jude ๐๐ป๐ค
Well written ๐
๐ thanks, Lakshmi ๐
Your creative limerick covers a range of emotions. Engaging lines, David.
๐๐๐ป Michele ๐๐ป๐
A round of applause and additional cheering for this delightful limerick!! I enjoyed every single word!
๐ค๐๐ป Muri ๐๐ป๐ค
nicely done.. i didn’t see till now that their feet weren’t touching the petals David! ๐
๐ Cindy ๐
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Love it, David. โค๏ธ
๐ค๐๐ป Punam ๐๐ป๐ค
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Cute and clever use of words and the picture!
๐ค๐๐ป Annette ๐๐ป๐ค
What an excellent take on the prompt, David! I love it!
๐๐๐ป Eugi ๐๐ป๐
Delightful. Poor little ghosts!
๐ป Dolly ๐ป