An American sentence:
In Arabic, I request an untorn bag. The cashier smiles, surprised.
What’s an ‘American Sentence’?
Allen Ginsberg, inventor of the American Sentence, felt that the haiku didnโt work as well in English. Ginsberg decided to remove the line structure of the haiku, maintaining the requirement of 17 syllables total. He felt that removing the line count freed the American Sentence up for the idiosyncrasies of English phonemes.
The requirements:
- Composed in one line;
- Syllabic, 17 syllables;
- Condensed, written with no unnecessary words or articles;
- Complete sentence or sentences;
- Includes a turn or enlightenment.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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Do you really speak Arabic, David?
very rudimentary spoken Palestinian Arabic
Still, very nice.
I love the cashier’s smile in that Middle-Eastern American sentence, David. ๐
โค CES โค ~ true story, and it happened just yesterday before Shabbat… I had to get a few last minute things and went with my daughter to a local 24-7 minimarket, conveniently situated across the street from her favorite ice cream shop ๐
Ice cream by any other name would taste as sweet. ๐
this is clearly true because in Israel it’s not called ice cream!
Love it
๐๐๐ป Annette ๐๐ป๐
his own language,
surprise
his smile speaks
๐งก๐๐ป Barbara ๐๐ป๐งก
Beautifully textured sentence, threaded with three striking emotions.
โค๏ธ๐๐ป Abi ๐๐ปโค๏ธ
Fantastic! I love this, David! ๐
๐๐๐ป Tea ๐๐ป๐