The Lai, or: Creativity verses form

Sangeetha & David’s new poetry project

Once upon a time, two poets who’d never met in person began writing verses back and forth over the Internet. Their first project took them some nine months: a 100 verse Hyakuin.

Once they’d completed their first oeuvre, they decided to continue their journey together; and Sangeetha came up with a fun idea. Beginning in January ’22, they took turns selecting poetic forms beginning with the letters of the alphabet (A through Z) and wrote poems to one another using those forms.

Upon completing that second project, Sangeetha suggested that they go through the alphabet once more, this time with an addition twist… In their new series, for every letter of the alphabet (A through Z), the two would select not only a poetic form but also – a keyword for each poem.

For ‘L’, Sangeetha selected the ‘Lai’ form and the keyword ‘Love’.

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L: Lai

Sangeetha’s Lai

Like it's the first time
Shy heartbeats align
We're one

How forever shines
When by Love's design
We run

Like it's the last time
every breath sublime
We won  

David’s Lai

February child;
I remain beguiled
by her

Now seven-years-old;
her life fast unfolds-
a blur

I'll be hers- always;
no matter what may
occur

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Lai?

• Stanzaic: Each stanza is compromised of the same number of triplets (3 line units);
• Syllabic: The syllable count in each triplet of lines is 5, 5, 2;
• Rhyming: Each triplet rhymes a-a-b.

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Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

–Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!