A Cleave poem
in the form of two Shadormas
|floating up above||by sick fleshliness|
|observing||what had been|
|understanding life’s veiled truths||apprehending past missteps|
|one ought feel ashamed||of a careless life|
How to read a cleave poem?
- Read the left hand poem as a first discrete poem.
- Read the right hand poem as a second discrete poem.
- Read the whole as a third integrated poem.
- The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lines with no set rhyme scheme (rhyme is optional);
- It is a syllabic poem with a meter of 3/5/3/3/7/5;
- It can have many stanzas, as long as each follows the meter.
The above was written for Colleen M. Chesebro’s ‘Tanka Tuesday’ prompt.
Poets were encouraged to write ekphrastic syllabic poems inspired by the photo below, which was provided by Britta Benston.
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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33 thoughts on “Free-floating, or: Fleshliness”
That was amazing and fascinating, David. It was beautiful in all its variations.
💝🙏🏻 Diana 🙏🏻💝
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Great poem, David! 🙂
🧡🙏🏻 Yvette 🙏🏻🧡
I love this cleave poem 💜 It is similar to a conscience poem although the text alignment orientation differ.
Fascinating write, David 💜
🤍🙏🏻 Tea 🙏🏻🤍 ~ thanks so much
My pleasure entirely, David 💜