A haiku
autumn stars rustle
bright shadows flit into view
phosphene theatrics
Moonwashed weekly prompt
Twiglet #297
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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[…] Phosphene theatrics, or: Autumn stars rustle […]
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Beautiful
๐๐๐ป D. A. ๐๐ป๐
Brilliant haiku, David! The last line is stellar! Bravo!
โจ๏ธ๐๐ปโจ๏ธ Eugi โจ๏ธ๐๐ปโจ๏ธ
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Beautiful. Wonderful take, David.๐
๐๐๐ป Grace ๐๐ป๐
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Beautiful phrasing
Be gentle with those eyeballs
๐๐ Abi ๐๐
๐คฃ, rubbing your eyeballs unconsciously will cause the autumn stars to shine
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๐ค ๐งก Filipa ๐งก ๐ค
Lovely take on the prompts. Thanks for the new word- I had to look up “phosphene,” – awesome!
๐งธ Suzette ๐งธ ~ thanks!
Thank You!
Me too! ๐
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Beautiful
๐๐๐ป Sadje ๐๐ป๐
I like the cosy idea of stars rustling ๐โจ
โญ ๐ Lia โญ ๐
Well done you.
๐๐๐ป Annette ๐๐ป๐
Phosphene theatrics is a fascinating phrase โ I do hope there were no knitting needles involvedโฆ
Nope, none ๐