Sangeetha & David’s new poetry project
Once upon a time, two poets who’d never met in person began writing verses back and forth over the Internet. Their first project took them some nine months: a 100 verse Hyakuin.
Once they’d completed their first oeuvre, they decided to continue their journey together; and Sangeetha came up with a fun idea. Beginning in January ’22, they took turns selecting poetic forms beginning with the letters of the alphabet (A through Z) and wrote poems to one another using those forms.
Upon completing that second project, Sangeetha suggested that they go through the alphabet once more, this time with an addition twist… In their new series, for every letter of the alphabet (A through Z), the two would select not only a poetic form but also – a keyword for each poem.
For ‘T’, Sangeetha selected the ‘Trianglet’ form and the keyword ‘Time’.
Time ran wild in wonder, blind to reason, till a memory in infinity, of a moment, forever beguiled Time
Time Devours Leisurely... As it well knows We live heedlessly, Killing needlessly For vain reward. Why must we waste our Time?
- A decastich: a poem in 10 lines;
- Syllabic: 1-2-3-4-5-5-4-3-2-1 syllables per line.
- Rhymed: rhyme scheme AbcxddxcbA
- First word repeated as last word.
Sangeetha & David’s ‘Creativity verses form’
- The Alliterisen (#alternatives)
- The Bragi (#books) [1st attempt]
- The Bragi (#books) [correct]
- The Cadae (#crisis)
- The Dodoitsu (#desire)
- The Emmett (#elves)
- The Fold (#friend)
- The Golda (#gravity)
- The Harrisham (#hope)
- The Inverted Refrain (#imagination)
- The Jram (#jubilee)
- The Kōel (#kismet)
- The Lai (#love)
- The Monometric (#motivation)
- The Nove Otto (#night)
- The Ovillejo (#origins)
- The Purely Hopeful (#poetry)
- The Quatern (#quiet)
- The Raay (#roots)
- The Septanelle (#smiles)
- The Trianglet (#time)
- The Ukiah (#underwear)
- The Violette (#vintage)
- The Whyquain (#wisdom)
- X (wildcard): The Eight-ette (#excuse)
- The Ya Hoo (#yes)
- The Zip (#zip)
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
27 thoughts on “The Trianglet, or: Creativity verses form”
This is beautiful!💓
And wow I just realized you’re the DAVID here, I thought it was someone else, maybe a namesake.😊
Nice one 👍
❤ Devine ❤ ~ thanks so much!
Yep, my first name is ‘David’… The word ‘ben’ simply means ‘son of’ in Hebrew; and my father’s name was ‘Alexander’… I created this blog in his memory, you see.
It’s confusing for a lot of people because ‘Ben’ is a popular name in English… So, I have to keep on explaining it to fellow bloggers 😉
Awwwn, nice 😊
Oh you have an amazing voice and cadence David which brought more depth to your writing. Love it .. 💞
❤️🙏🏻 Cindy 🙏🏻❤️
💛🙏🏻 Lov 🙏🏻💛 ~ thanks!
Learning this new form.. the Trianglet. Amazing. And yes, Time is an important and scarce resource
💕🙏🏻 Lamittan 🙏🏻💕
Beautifully written…lovely spoken word as well, David…you must do more of those ✨
💗🙏🏻 Navin 🙏🏻💗
As I wrote to Sangeetha, these each have a unique flavor despite sharing theme and form!! One finds time wild to tame and the other time runs rampant never to be constrained…
🤎🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻🤎
Perhaps its too early or I need my second coffee but just asking: is there a short audio clip accompanying these two excellent poetic offerings?
Sure! I’ve added my reading to the post (please excuse the sirens in the background), and if you want the direct link to the audio file, here it is:
Excellent thank you!
🧸 Suzette 🧸
Very good, both.
💛🙏🏻 Dolly 🙏🏻💛
Time is an infinite subject. Two worthy considerations. (K)
❤️🙏🏻 Kerfe 🙏🏻❤️
🤓🙏🏻 Margaret 🙏🏻🤓
indeed. i love that last line, David.
💝🙏🏻 Audrine, thank you 🙏🏻💝
always a pleasure 😊