A Cleave poem
In the form of two Tankas
thick heavy droplets | cloudy, directionless | |
the sun pulls up its blanket | glowing with pigeon grey light | |
weary, reluctant | hazy horizon | |
cozies upon bed of snow | making dreams of distant trees | |
covering the sleepy realms | humanity cannot see |
How to read a Cleave poem?
Simply:
- Read the left hand poem as a first discrete poem.
- Read the right hand poem as a second discrete poem.
- Read the whole as a third integrated poem.
Twiglets #304
Moonwashed musings weekly prompt
Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
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Youโre welcome, David!
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You have the knack for making any poetry form a masterpiece! Bravo!
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