Dreaming, or: Foggy

A Cleave poem

In the form of two Tankas

thick heavy droplets cloudy, directionless
the sun pulls up its blanket glowing with pigeon grey light
weary, reluctant hazy horizon
cozies upon bed of snow making dreams of distant trees
covering the sleepy realms humanity cannot see

How to read a Cleave poem?

Simply:

  1. Read the left hand poem as a first discrete poem.
  2. Read the right hand poem as a second discrete poem.
  3. Read the whole as a third integrated poem.

Twiglets #304

pigeon grey light


Moonwashed musings weekly prompt

Directionless


Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!

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