A ‘reverse etheree’
transient fingers clacking, eyes scanning, transient concerns, loves, perceptions, transient earthbound existence, transient concepts perceived, transient, here then gone, transient then gone, transient we, transient transi- tran-
Moonwashed Musings weekly prompt
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
16 thoughts on “Here then gone, or: Transi… ent…”
Excellent write, David. 🧡
💚 thanks, Jeff 💚
How interesting 👏
💚 Navin 💚 ~ thank you
You’re welcome David 💫💟✨
Wonderful repetition and the disappearing word at the final lines is genius!!
🧡🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻🧡
Happy Thanksgiving, David!
💓🙏🏻 Dolly 🙏🏻💓
Wow! Outstanding piece, David! Bravo!
💕🙏🏻 Eugi 🙏🏻💕
Oh wow! Brillant. I can imagine the impact of reading this poem out loud! Bravo, David!!
🧡🙏🏻 Suzette 🙏🏻🧡
Wonderful – down to the last ‘t’. 🙂
💚🙏🏻 Terveen 🙏🏻💚