Sangeetha & David’s new poetry project
Once upon a time, two poets who’d never met in person began writing verses back and forth over the Internet. Their first project took them some nine months: a 100 verse Hyakuin.
Once they’d completed their first oeuvre, they continued their journey together; Sangeetha came up with a fun idea. Beginning in January ’22, they took turns selecting poetic forms beginning with the letters of the alphabet (A through Z) and wrote poems to one another using those forms.
Upon completing that second project, Sangeetha suggested they go through the alphabet once more but in their new series, for every letter of the alphabet (A through Z), they would select not only a poetic form but also – a keyword for each poem.
Eventually, they completed their third series and decided to embark on a fourth towards the end of 2022. This time, taking turns, they would create their own poetic forms for every letter of the alphabet (A through Z), and exchange poems, as they’d done before.
For ‘C’, David created the ‘Ckackackonance’ form.
C: Ckackackonance
David’s Ckackackonance
True tragedy, I've definitively determined,
Is the disastrous demise of one who clearly craves every second
I'm piercingly pained, struck dumb, sick to my stomach,
Hopeless and helpless... Basically: well beyond broken.
The impending disaster leers, laughing.
Sangeetha’s Ckackackonance
Disaster, don't you dare
Scare the daylights out of us simple people
Skip, skeddadle, scurry off right now!
Do dither off into your dilapidated doomsday dungeon
We folks got luck stuck on our cute colourful cloaks
Don't you strike a blood bargain with the dastardly devil
We would outsmart, out-talk you out of your black attack
And that would be a disaster for you!
Ckackackonance?
- At least five lines;
- Lines can be separated into as any number of stanzas;
- All lines must have different syllable counts (no two lines can share a syllable count);
- No rhyme; no rhythm;
- Each line must include at least:
- Two instances of consonance;
- Two instances of “plosive” consonants: [t], [d], [c/k/ck], [g], [p], [b];
- The more “plosive consonants”, the better!
Sangeetha & David’s ‘Creativity forms verses’
Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
Very interesting form and excellent poems.
Shabbat Shalom, David.
๐๐๐ป Dolly ๐๐ป๐ ~ shavua tov
I think I might learn to write one, but I donโt know that Iโd ever learn to spell it correctly. Kudos to you both!
๐๐๐ป Stephanie ๐๐ป๐
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
๐๐๐ป Filipa ๐๐ป๐
Both of them are very creative! Great work! ๐๐ป
Very cool form, David and enjoyed both your offerings in it ๐
๐ thank you, Karima ๐
I knew that with the consonance they would be fun to read aloud – I was not wrong! They are really good!!
๐๐๐ป Muri ๐๐ป๐
These forms you’re creating are so fun! Bravo, you two! ๐
๐๐๐ป Colleen ๐๐ป๐
What a funny name you gave the form. Have me laughing. Xoxo both of you great jobs.
๐ค๐๐ป thanks, Selma ๐๐ป๐ค
Now, here’s a word to sink your teeth into Ckackackonance. You never cease to amaze and entertain even in the worst of times. ๐
๐๐๐ป Cindy ๐๐ป๐ ~ it is the best of times, it is the worst of times…
โค๏ธ๐๐ผ๐๐๐ผ
You two never cease to amazeโฆ This is a super-fun format, and the staccato nature of the repeated hard consonant sounds lends it a really unique feel. Plus, the playfulness here is really enjoyable. A tip oโ the cap to both of you, Sangeetha and David! ๐
๐๐๐ป Mike ๐๐ป๐ ~ you are very kind