A Senryū
Small, lethal verses
whistle through sheets piercingly
blowing through our hearts
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
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Just a whistle swift
Feeling like a gentle breeze?
Dagger of eros
And smitten is he
❤ Abi ❤ ~ that is so good!
😊, thank you. I love how your original thought catches fire and then you like it, that is the best. ❤☺
I love when a poem flies into my soul- a direct hit. This one explains the process beautifully!
🧡🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻🧡
wow. that really pierced and went through. nice image, too.
💗🙏🏻 Audrine 🙏🏻💗
The Bullseye David… ouch. 💗
💝🙏🏻 Cindy 🙏🏻💝
💗💗❤️
This form is so beautiful and amazing, and the poem you used to illustrate and describe these ideas seems perfect.
💓🙏🏻 Amelia 🙏🏻💓 ~ thanks so much!
~David
Excellent.
חג חנוכה שמח, David!
Вас всех тоже 😍
Спасибо! Дети переедаются и ирают в дрейдл.