A ‘Garland’ Shadorma
shades of gray
blur the world entire;
even once
stark outlines
become fuzzier each day;
everything is one
what constructs
separate people
that one can't
unravel
with open-minded, earnest
receptivity?
surrounded
daily by others,
observe them;
see yourself
in their struggles and triumphs;
wisdom in caring
biases
simplify our lives;
reflecting
honestly
upon inner processes
causes discomfort
young children
demand to be heard;
over time,
we learn to
listen; words sound different;
empathy evolves
you and I,
we're no different;
all of us
love and dream;
humanity transcends worlds;
we all want the same
shades of gray
separate people;
observe them
honestly;
listen; words sound different;
we all want the same
‘Garland’ Shadorma?
The ‘Garland’ Shadorma was created by Sylvia Cognac, modeled after the ‘Garland’ Cinquain. Essentially, it a Shadorma series of seven stanzas, with the seventh and final stanza being composed of lines from all six previous stanzas.
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When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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โshades of gray
separate people;
observe them
honestly;
listen; words sound different;
we all want the sameโ
Yes indeed! We all want the same things inspite of the different shades of grey that supposedly separate us! ๐๐๐ฏ๐ฏ๐๐
๐๐๐ป Ken ๐๐ป๐
Wonderful! There are more similarities than differences between races, religions, cultures and traditions… we really are all shadows of each other!
๐งก๐๐ป Muri ๐๐ป๐งก
Absolutely beautiful โจ ๐ ๐ซ
๐๐๐ป Navin ๐๐ป๐
Live in hope that greys prevail
๐ค๐๐ป Andrew ๐๐ป๐ค ~ amen
Beautiful! This was perfect. โค๏ธ๐๐ป
๐๐๐ป Colleen ๐๐ป๐