Beckoning, or: Forgotten

A Choka

the past far behind
the future long forgotten
the present untold
resignation a reason
and despite efforts
at a distant muted life
the spirits refuse
ignoring all my attempts
at evanescence
emboldened by memory
voices beckoning
eyes smiling innocently
reaching out past well enough

Choka?

The most intricate Japanese Poetry form is the Choka, or Long Poem. The early form consisted of a series of katauta joined together. This gives a choice of form structures of 5/7/5/5/7/7โ€ฆ etc., or: 5/7/7/5/7โ€ฆ etc.

The Choka could be any total line length and indeed many exceeded 100 lines. Looking at this, it is easy to see why Poetic Historians believe the katauta is the original basic unit of Japanese poetry using either the 17 or 19 unit onji.


d’Verse Quadrille

The above choka is my take on dโ€™Verseโ€™s Quadrille challenge.

The Quadrille is simply a poem of 44 words (excluding the title), and it can take any form. This weekโ€™s challenge was to use the word โ€œboldโ€ in a Quadrille.


Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!

31 thoughts on “Beckoning, or: Forgotten”

  1. Dear David, your poem captures a sense of longing and struggling to move forward, while being stuck in the past. This is a very familiar feeling and it’s agonizing, I hope that you will be able to move on. ๐Ÿ™‚

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