dโVerse prosery
Iโll not think of you at breakfast; this morning is a different thing. Still, I’d rather not have blueberry pancakes with whipped cream today. Also, I’ll not think of you while shopping on Thursday for Shabbat Friday night dinner; this week is a different thing; but… I don’t think I’ll purchase your favorite matzo ball mix again. And when I’m out on our nightly stroll, admiring the pregnant moon flirting from behind those Jerusalem clouds, I’ll not think of you. This month is a different thing… But I shan’t whistle Van Morrison’s ‘Moondance’ as we once did together.
Now that I think of it, you might like to know that I’ve purchased tickets for me and the kids to visit my folks for Passover, as we’ve always done, but I’m feeling quite certain that this yearโs a different thing- Iโll not think of you.
Prosery?
dโVerse prosery is flash fiction with a beginning, a middle and an end, in any genre of the authorโs choice, no longer than 144 words. This very short piece of prose must include an assigned line from a poem, within the 144 word limit. Writers may change the punctuation of the assigned line, but they may not insert words within the quotation.
This yearโs a different thing, โ
–Charlotte Mary Mew (1869 โ 1928), ‘I so liked Spring’
Iโll not think of you.
I love the repeated use of the line, David. Nice one. ๐
๐ค๐๐ป Aishwarya ๐๐ป๐ค
Nice use of the given line. The repetition works very well.
๐๐๐ป Lisa ๐๐ป๐
Brilliant! ๐ท
๐๐๐ป Tricia ๐๐ป๐ ~ thanks!
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love the imagery of this David!
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“the pregnant moon flirting from behind those Jerusalem clouds, Iโll not think of you. This month is a different thingโฆ But I shanโt whistle Van Morrisonโs โMoondanceโ as we once did together.
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๐๐๐ป Cindy ๐๐ป๐
Well done, David, and very sad.
๐๐๐ป Dolly ๐๐ป๐
I like that Van Morrison song. I found this sad but beautiful.
๐ ๐๐ป Molly ๐๐ป ๐ ~ it’s one of my favorite songs!
He has several great ones.
quite a few!
Magical! ๐
๐ค๐๐ป Filipa ๐๐ป๐ค
Well done, David!
๐๐๐ป Dwight ๐๐ป๐ ~ thanks!
:>)
So many stories underneath these words. (K)
๐๐๐ป Kerfe ๐๐ป๐ ~ yes, that is how I imagine it…
Beautiful in every way… ๐
๐ค๐๐ป Terveen ๐๐ป๐ค ~ thank you!