well, sure, I've kissed my mother, I responded stupidly; no- I mean- like this, she said, stretching her thin fair neck forward, leaving me no time to marvel at soft, small goosebumps on her skin
A Korean verse form related to haiku and tanka and comprised of three lines of 14-16 syllables each, for a total of 44-46 syllables. Each line contains a pause near the middle, similar to a caesura, though the break need not be metrical. The first half of the line contains six to nine syllables; the second half should contain no fewer than five. Originally intended as songs, sijo can treat romantic, metaphysical, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a “turn,” and the third provides closure. Modern sijo are sometimes printed in six lines.
d’Verse poetics: Prelude to a kiss
At d’Verse, poets are encouraged to write a poem about kissing; a special kiss that still haunts you, a peck, a snog, a kiss hello or a kiss goodbye. Whatever it is, try to capture the wordless intimacy of the act.
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41 thoughts on “Goosebumps, or: New perspective”
Surprise, surprise! Cute one, David. 🙂
🧡🙏🏻 Terveen 🙏🏻🧡 ~ thanks!
David, I almost had goosebumps reading this. I don’t think I ever kissed my mother. My grandfather used to kiss all us kids, he would smear chewing tobacco juice all over our cheeks with his beard. I don’t remember my first kiss, it may have been in first grade. (We didn’t have kindergarten.)
💚🙏🏻 Jim 🙏🏻💚 ~ such stark memories!
I love the emotion you express in this sijo, David. Excellent. I got goosebumps! 💜
💙🙏🏻 Colleen 🙏🏻💙
First Kim’s poem and now this, I can’t stop smiling! hahaha This is so CUTE (^_^) ❤
❤ 🙂 M Jay 🙂 ❤ ~thanks!
I’m picturing a first kiss here…sweet and beautifully arranged.
💕🙏🏻 Jai 🙏🏻💕
💗🙏🏻 Sadje 🙏🏻💗
Sweet, relishing moments. Wonderful piece
💖🙏🏻 Lamittan 🙏🏻💖