
mo-
tionless-
e-
motion-
less; and yet-
there's... twink-
ling
there, it...
seems, mayhaps
it's just the light
playing tricks-
and yet...
her
wry eyes
smile, knowing
our eyes
are
admir-
ing-
Twiglets #313
#TankaTuesday
Colleen Chesebro offers us the painting (1892) by the American portrait artist John Singer Sargent of Lady Agnew of Lochnaw as inspiration for our syllabic poems this week.
Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.
–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!
Loved your interpretation David.
๐๐๐ป Balroop ๐๐ป๐ ~ thank you
Beautiful take on this portrait, David!
๐๐๐ป Sara ๐๐ป๐
Amazing poem, David!
๐งก๐๐ป Kavya ๐๐ป๐งก ~ thanks!
All that. (K)
๐งก๐๐ป Kerfe ๐๐ป๐งก
Lovely David โค
๐๐๐ป Ange ๐๐ป๐
knowing
our eyes
are
admir-
ing-โฆโฆโฆโฆ.. exactly!
๐๐๐ป Debi ๐๐ป๐ ~ thanks!
~David
Charming and viscerally appealing
๐๐๐ป Lamittan ๐๐ป๐
What a great take on the Lady’s eyes… on Rebecca’s blog there’s a video that shares the Lady was recovering from the flu when she sat for this portrait. Those eyes pierce your heart!! Well done, David.
Yes, I read that post, Colleen โค
Thanks for sharing it with us!
~David
Youโre welcome.
“Wry eyes smile knowing…” spot on. ๐
๐งก๐๐ป Chu ๐๐ป๐งก ~ thanks!
~David
Youโve captured the essence of that gaze brilliantly. Wonderful! ๐
๐๐๐ป Terveen ๐๐ป๐ ~ thanks!
So good David
๐๐๐ป Sadje ๐๐ป๐
๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
Aye, aye!
๐ค๐๐ป Annette ๐๐ป๐ค
Beautiful David, indeed the eyes have it ๐๐
๐๐๐ป Willow ๐๐ป๐
mayhaps,- how proper being consistent with the era.
And a beautiful reflection of the painting
Now that you speak to her eyes
Yes I see that
You think she is aware that her eyes have this effect ….?
๐ค๐๐ป Abi ๐๐ป๐ค ~ possibly….
๐๐
Good morning David
You tooโฃ๏ธ
Oh! Yes I am sure she knows ๐
Oh yes!!!
The artist and the Poet got it right๐
Thank you ๐๐
You are welcome ๐
Enjoyed this one. I like your focus on her eyes. ๐
โค๏ธ๐๐ป Kelley ๐๐ปโค๏ธ ~ thanks so much!
~David
Youโre welcome!
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