Darkness, or: No place to hide

I feel a darkness deep, down inside;
From myself, there's no place to hide;
Though I put no stock in sh*t,
Too oft, I'm stepping in it,
Sliding through life, just along for the ride.

56 thoughts on “Darkness, or: No place to hide”

1. So relatable. Nice, David!

   1. ❤️🙏🏻 Susi 🙏🏻❤️ ~ thanks so much

      1. You’re very welcome, David! ❤

2. I totally feel this one. Same shit another day, as my grandpa used to say.

   1. 💛🙏🏻 Bridgette 🙏🏻💛 ~ exactly!

      ~David

3. I can say, David is an evergreen source of intelligentsia.

   Though, I’m not able to read as many blogs as I used to earlier, including yours, I must say I got the word “skeptical” in my intro from you.

   We’re celebrating “Holi – the festival of colours” in India.
   Happy Holi to you! 🟣🔵🔴🟡🟠

   1. 💛🙏🏻 Lokesh 🙏🏻💛 ~ you too!

4. I tend to be positive and take the best of life, but lately , I’m feeling sad and tired.

   1. 💔🙏🏻 Filipa 🙏🏻💔 ~ 🤗 😘

      1. 🙏🏻💙

5. Keep going David! And enjoy every ride! The best is yet to come! 🩵🩶

   1. 💖🙏🏻 Filipa 🙏🏻💖

6. A dark subject in a light hearted form… You do manage to do that well!!

   1. 🤍🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻🤍

7. The world does feel even more off-kilter than usual at the moment. I hope the ship rights itself a bit soon…(K)

   1. 💛🙏🏻 Kerfe 🙏🏻💛 ~ I wish

8. Lol…me too, David. Outstanding limerick. 💜

   1. 🧡🙏🏻 Jai 🙏🏻🧡 ~ thanks!

      1. My pleasure. 💜

9. Human experience of feeling lost and overwhelmed by life, even when we don’t necessarily believe in negativity or allow it to define us.

   1. 🖤🙏🏻 Jaideep 🙏🏻🖤 ~ yes, you understand me so well!

      ~David