Hope is that word- that rhymes with 'Nope.' Most abused of tired story tropes, in which numb addicts weakly grope, clutching at the ends of their ropes, desperate for their next hit of dope. Hope is that word- that rhymes with 'Nope.' Most perilous of slippery slopes, a dangerous drug that's used to cope, lest powerlessness push one to tope for brief relief and still- no soap. Hope is that word.
W3 poetry prompt
This was written for Kerfe Roig’s W3 poetry prompt to compose a poem beginning with the words “hope is” from Emily Dickinson’s (1830-1886) famous line: “Hope is the thing with feathers”
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When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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43 thoughts on “Feathers, or: Rope fibers”
The pessimist in me appreciates this. I feel like this would work as a spoken word piece too
🤎🙏🏻 JYP 🙏🏻🤎 ~ thanks! I’ve come to the conclusion that I am not good at reading poetry aloud…
That is one of my favorite Emily Dickenson poems. I like yours very much too, David! It is very well-written and impactful.
The answers to our problems are not chemical, although solutions are what addicts are seeking, I think. There is hope for them if they can learn to say, “Nope, ” get off dope, and learn to deal with their problems.
💝🙏🏻 Cheryl 🙏🏻💝 ~ I agree 👍🏻
Nice play on words, capturing the complexities of hope.
💖🙏🏻 Abi 🙏🏻💖 ~ שבוע טוב
שבוע טוב 🥰
Maybe pessimistic, but your poetic perspective is positively perfection!
💛🙏🏻 Michele 🙏🏻💛
I was smiling reading this…the play up of words is so beautiful
💞🙏🏻 Mich 🙏🏻💞 ~ thanks!
I read this and my first impulse was to laugh. That was followed by feeling a bit guilty for thinking it funny – addiction and junkies are no laughing matter… still I felt the humor in this!
💝🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻💝 ~ I get that