in the early Passover light I awaken in a mist, softly resting on silky sage, fluttering ephemeral wings free to stay or fly away salved by generations' wisdoms
A Korean verse form related to haiku and tanka and comprised of three lines of 14-16 syllables each, for a total of 44-46 syllables. Each line contains a pause near the middle, similar to a caesura, though the break need not be metrical. The first half of the line contains six to nine syllables; the second half should contain no fewer than five. Originally intended as songs, sijo can treat romantic, metaphysical, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a “turn,” and the third provides closure. Modern sijo are sometimes printed in six lines.
Moonwashed weekly prompt #137
Let’s write poetry together!
When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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74 thoughts on “Sage, or: Wisdom”
💝🙏🏻 Dolly 🙏🏻💝 ~ תודה!
A dream state or a dreamy state – I can’t tell only that this sijo is airy and light and floats through my mind…
💞🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻💞
Exquisite, David. 🙏💖
🖤🙏🏻 Jeff 🙏🏻🖤 ~ thanks so much!