A ‘Waltz Wave’ poem
des- olate un- tended rocky fields of bro- ken promis- es and with- ered hopes rustle under swirl- ing vor- tex of un- familiar night skies that recall all
#WDYS prompt #182
For this week’s ‘What Do You See’ prompt, Sadje offers us the above image, created by Tasos Mansour, of a barren tree in an arid landscape. In the background, star trails form a pattern in the night sky.
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47 thoughts on “Recall, or: Withdrawal”
This is beautifully written.🙏🏾
🤍🙏🏻 Jude 🙏🏻🤍 ~ thanks, friend!
[…] David; Recall or withdrawal […]
Wow! Wonderful take.
🤍🙏🏻 Indira 🙏🏻🤍
We are often a field of jagged rock – sharp and dangerous to any who dare approach. We are the subject of quiet observation from the stars and moon – and we cannot hide!
💙🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻💙
loved your take David! Really well done! 💗
💖🙏🏻 Cindy 🙏🏻💖 ~ thanks!
You’re soooo welcome David!
I’m riveted! Beautiful write.
🖤😊 Sangeetha 😊🖤 ~ thanks so much