some selves sleep; some silent sit; some slip into nothingness; with each step forward, hopeless, potential realities collapse away all around me, eyes pleading... ... I no longer look down
A Korean verse form related to haiku and tanka and comprised of three lines of 14-16 syllables each, for a total of 44-46 syllables. Each line contains a pause near the middle, similar to a caesura, though the break need not be metrical. The first half of the line contains six to nine syllables; the second half should contain no fewer than five. Originally intended as songs, sijo can treat romantic, metaphysical, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a “turn,” and the third provides closure. Modern sijo are sometimes printed in six lines.
What Do You See #183
For this week’s #WDYS image prompt, Sadje offers us this image of a young woman lying on the edge of a precipice. She is holding out her hand and on the edge of the image, we see a hand extended toward her.
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42 thoughts on “Life, or: No regrets”
[…] David; Life or no regrets […]
I imagine those in last days knowing that (perhaps) nothing or something else awaits and they are more than ready.
But I also believe there are other ways to interpret your verse. (((Hugs))). Jules
💜🙏🏻 Jules 🙏🏻💜 ~ thanks
Love your last line 💕
💕🙏🏻 Ange 🙏🏻💕 ~ thanks!
That’s a very deep poem. Whence the inspiration?
💝🙏🏻 CES 🙏🏻💝 ~ not sure; just a reflection of my perception, I suppose…
You must never look down.
💛🙏🏻 Bridgette 🙏🏻💛 ~ it’s hard though
It truly is. Looking down and looking back. I’m working on it too.
This last line! 👏 💞”.. I no longer look down “👏💞
💖🙏🏻 Cindy 🙏🏻💖