Choking down, or: Tingles

A Tanka

appreciation
an awkward horse pill, whereas
dissatisfaction

a warm bodily tingle
that numbs my self-awareness

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#TankaTuesday

For Tanka Tuesday, Colleen encourages us to write a tanka.

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Tanka?

• Syllabic: most commonly 5-7-5-7-7 (in variation the lines are best kept with odd numbered syllables);
• Usually five lines;
• Defined by content and style more than the syllabic prescription (but there is still a pattern of short and long lines);
• Written as a personal or emotional expression of themes such as natural beauty, love, the impermanence of life, the activities of the common people;
• Composed with the priority of “to be touched by things” and use of concrete images.

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Let’s write poetry together!

When it comes to partnership, some humans can make their lives alone – it’s possible. But creatively, it’s more like painting: you can’t just use the same colours in every painting. It’s just not an option. You can’t take the same photograph every time and live with art forms with no differences.

–Ben Harper (b. 1969)

Would you like to create poetry with me and have a completed poem of yours featured here at the Skeptic’s Kaddish? I am very excited to have launched the ‘Poetry Partners’ initiative and am looking forward to meeting and creating with you… Check it out!