A rhyming sestina
Some people don't like the word Jew A label that fits me like comfy shoe Jews were murdered and made into glue Regarded as less than beasts at a zoo Blamed for both the plague and the flu In the end, though, it's the haters who stew Jewish cholent is a magical stew If you'd like some, just befriend a Jew It can cure both COVID and the flu And when it spills, it won't stain your shoe Come, let's pack some for a trip to the zoo Food and family bind us like glue From true history we cannot unglue All began with primordial stew We all got here by way of the zoo European; African; Jew Mortality fits us all like a shoe And we die of the very same flus There are always new strains of the flu Viruses to human cell membranes glue Vaccines help but cannot fully shoe We are but chunks of meat in this stew Asian; South American; Jew Are we destined to live as if in a zoo? It takes a great deal to get me zooed I don't suffer much from brown bottle flu My friends joke that I'm a Russian Jew I reply that I'm rubber, they're glue And we laugh over hearty Jew stew The secret ingredient's sole of shoe In the heat, men buzzing flies shoo But not so those beasts at the zoo Nor are they wont to sit and stew Every species has its own flu DNA is a powerful glue Oceanian; North American; Jew Some racists claim diplomatic flu When accused, they stand as if glued Much abashed by this very proud Jew
Notes
- My initial intentions in writing this poem were:
- Write a sestina that rhymes
- (the sestina poetic form does not at all require rhyme)
- Write a poem about antisemitism
- Write a sestina that rhymes
- I deliberately used the word ‘Jew’ as one of the rhyming words; the other five words that rhymed with ‘Jew’ were picked at random.
d’Verse Open Link Night
For today’s d’Verse OLN, I’m sharing this poem, which I wrote almost exactly two years ago – in May 2021. At the time, I thought I’d try my hand at writing more sestinas, but I haven’t done many at all… Perhaps I should rectify that, but they remain daunting!
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–Ben Harper (b. 1969)
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You managed to create discomfort through your seemingly silly rhyming sestina. You did it deliberately. Political/religious satire is meant make others uncomfortable and you did it fabulously. In awe of your talent. ๐๐ผ
๐ค๐๐ป Punam ๐๐ป๐ค ~ you are so sweet
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Poignant, funny, thought-provoking. Love this, David. Bravo for trying this in rhyme!
๐๐๐ป Cris๐๐ป๐ ~ thanks; this form is not harder in rhyme; it just creates a different sound