eyes closed, I focus
downwards into meaning's depths
I hear others burrowing
listening below surface
Prompt: The Print the Whales Make
The above tanka is my response to the d’Verse challenge to write a poem in the first person that compares some trait of ours with something animal.
It should not be a whale, but another creature (mammal, fish, bird, insect, etc.) with which we have something in common. The title should be the animal thing, in the same way Marjorie Saiser chose ‘The Print the Whales Make’.
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I find myself pulled
to write magnetic haikus
but site doesn't work
My 2nd tricube
What ~ if you
Should ~ read all
In ~ more ways?
The ~ truth is
Real ~ in God's
World ~ but you
Look ~ past it
Like ~ a myth
I learned about the tricube form from Jenn Patino. How much meaning can we stuff into so few syllables? I love playing with these kinds of things!
a beyond seems far
finned finitude ours
wise stare through water
simple stern comprehension
eyes always open
rim where water licks surface air above rim
side invisible but known existence only this side
cornered word fish always turns to next corner
edges clear to big shapes peering through edges
side through which small sails visible before side
edging in through hollow plastic hull near edge
corner plant stiff and also in another corner
bottom covered by many colors all over bottom
My friend Suzette introduced me to the bagua form of poetry so, of course, I had to give it a go!
She draws me;
Jews' age-old decree;
Through her we
are set free
for our holy day weekly ~
we simply can be
I was recently exposed to the shadorma form of poetry by Kerfe and Lauren. As always, I had to give it a go… this is definitely one of those short forms that challenges us to pack as much as possible into every word. Quite lovely, really – I enjoyed this form!
Note: the form need not rhyme.